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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sat May 01, 2010 11:36 pm
lol i used to do it when I had no phone
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sat May 01, 2010 11:47 pm
np.
~Insane~
They say I'm insane
But only someone as sane as I
Could be crazy yet still be sane
And be able to say I'm not either.
I confuse them and confuzzle them
They call me crazy
And I show them I'm not
And that i am
Did you follow that at all?
~Insane~
They say I'm insane
But only someone as sane as I
Could be crazy yet still be sane
And be able to say I'm not either.
I confuse them and confuzzle them
They call me crazy
And I show them I'm not
And that i am
Did you follow that at all?
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by Fire Forever Sat May 01, 2010 11:51 pm
haha Nice poem I had to read it over twice to get it..I think
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sat May 01, 2010 11:52 pm
lol its really random...I'm not sure I get it..xD
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sat May 08, 2010 9:08 pm
Rain
The soothing sounds
Of falling on the pavement
The smells of nature
Coming to life...
not finished...
The soothing sounds
Of falling on the pavement
The smells of nature
Coming to life...
not finished...
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by GothicXHermit Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:41 pm
Review to 'lost'.
I love this the most out of all the poems you've posted.
One thing I like about your writes though, they are short and simple. I don't have to read through a whole chunk of words to get the point you want to get across.
Although there were no stanza breaks here, but it was the right choice (: This poem was very fast-paced and leaves you with a lot of space to imagine what you'd like to. Another plus to your poems. They don't pave and piece and form a whole piece of picture. Your poems read like... a jigsaw, just that the last piece is free for any one to piece, and that last piece that the reader puts in to complete the poem changes the jigsaw work into a whole new picture.
favorite lines:
'I'm lost in the darkness,
lost to the world.'
The imagery created, the emotions evoked. Just perfect. I really love this poem the most (:
Keep writing!
I love this the most out of all the poems you've posted.
One thing I like about your writes though, they are short and simple. I don't have to read through a whole chunk of words to get the point you want to get across.
Although there were no stanza breaks here, but it was the right choice (: This poem was very fast-paced and leaves you with a lot of space to imagine what you'd like to. Another plus to your poems. They don't pave and piece and form a whole piece of picture. Your poems read like... a jigsaw, just that the last piece is free for any one to piece, and that last piece that the reader puts in to complete the poem changes the jigsaw work into a whole new picture.
favorite lines:
'I'm lost in the darkness,
lost to the world.'
The imagery created, the emotions evoked. Just perfect. I really love this poem the most (:
Keep writing!
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:24 am
thank you very much. did you read insane lol..I'm not sure where my head was when i wrote it but it seems to make sense
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by GothicXHermit Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:20 am
I got what you mean, but I don't know how to explain either.
Well, everyone is sane only to themselves because there's always a side of us whom only ourselves can understand, that is crazy and insane to the rest of the world.
Well, everyone is sane only to themselves because there's always a side of us whom only ourselves can understand, that is crazy and insane to the rest of the world.
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:24 am
lol I wrote it out of no where..like...3 days of no sleep and it came to me...
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Jul 11, 2010 3:06 am
i'll look at them in the morning when I am awake enough lol
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:17 pm
Devastating
Painful
too much to bear
It hurts
It kills
It ruins lives
How can something
As beautiful as love
Be so destructive.
Painful
too much to bear
It hurts
It kills
It ruins lives
How can something
As beautiful as love
Be so destructive.
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:17 pm
Used...Broken
Now there's nothing left
only a body wandering for its soul
A soul looking for a better life...a better place
Death is the only way
I'm worthless, unloved
Might as well die
And make the whole world happy...
Now there's nothing left
only a body wandering for its soul
A soul looking for a better life...a better place
Death is the only way
I'm worthless, unloved
Might as well die
And make the whole world happy...
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:16 am
Why cant you be happy?
Why must you try and hurt me?
Are you really trying to help someone else?
Or are you doing this for your sick pleasure?
I'm tired of it.
Stop it now.
Or else you may not be here.
To see yourself fail.
Why must you try and hurt me?
Are you really trying to help someone else?
Or are you doing this for your sick pleasure?
I'm tired of it.
Stop it now.
Or else you may not be here.
To see yourself fail.
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:16 am
When he tore my heart
you were there to mend it
Even if you were someone else's
You chose me instead
I cant thank you enough
Or love you enough
But I can try and be
Better than what you need.
you were there to mend it
Even if you were someone else's
You chose me instead
I cant thank you enough
Or love you enough
But I can try and be
Better than what you need.
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:16 am
This is thanks to all the drama...(OLD)
The Drama was too much
I couldn't take it anymore
I have 5 gashed on my arm
And blood all over the floor...
The Drama was too much
I couldn't take it anymore
I have 5 gashed on my arm
And blood all over the floor...
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Re: Karena's Poetry
by KarenaTheFreak Sun Aug 01, 2010 3:16 am
You make me happy when i am sad
Bring me up when I am down
Show me love I dont think I deserve
You change my whole world
I want to make you happy
Show you my love
I'll soon have my chance
To show you everything..
Dedicated to my one and only love...
Bring me up when I am down
Show me love I dont think I deserve
You change my whole world
I want to make you happy
Show you my love
I'll soon have my chance
To show you everything..
Dedicated to my one and only love...
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